Positive review of The Undeniable Labyrinth on

Received a relatively positive review by a purchaser of my first Promethead novel here on It’s always good to hear things like:

“A fresh story line that gave nothing away.”

“It sucked me in and left me wanting more.”

And something that every author want’s to read:

I’ll buy the next one.”

The reviewer had some credible points about my writing style and use of stream of consciousness in several chapters. To each their own (although, for the sake of objectivity, it only make up about 5% of the novel). I will let potential readers know now, who might be concerned about such indulgence, that there is none of that in the follow up book I am currently in the later drafts of. I only use that narrative mode in particular environments for specific reasons (in this series, anyways).

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